Saturday, March 27, 2010

Chapter 7 "let this be a clean race!"

Gina Stepped begrudgingly out of the car and leaned onto a nearby Traincar. Reina stepped in front of our cars in between both of us. she had a rolled up paper in one hand and an old red handkerchief blotted with motor oil in the other. "Okay folks!" she spoke through the piece of paper like a Loudspeaker. "let this be a clean race! first one to complete a full lap around the Train Station wins the pot! now ladies and gentleman, Start your engines!" Mikes car started right up with a roar and a small chirp from the exhaust. you can tell that Reina has been tinkering with his new toy. it took my car about a minute to start up. the SVX awoke with a definitive roar and a chirp from the dual exhaust pipes. the car was far from stock itself and has held its own against much tougher cars in its prime. Reina raised her left arm straight up into the air with the oily red handkerchief dangling from her fingertips. "when this rag drops, you guys floor it, okay?" we both revved our engines in agreement. "On your marks, get set." before she could say that last word, a red and blue light strobed across Reina's body followed by a chirping whistle.



"Cops!" everyone screamed. Reina dropped the dirty handkerchief and hopped in Mikes car. they both sped off into the maze of abandoned Train cars. "Gina! Get in!" i screamed out my moonroof hoping Gina heard. within a split second she dove feet first through the opening in the moonroof. her slender body made it look easy. "hold on." placing my car in first gear, i slammed down on the gas only to hear a loud metal scraping noise. the car jerked forward, then came to an abrupt halt. i realized i let off the clutch too quickly and accidently caused a stall. "Fuck!" i shouted. the police cruiser was only yards away from us now and i have to restart the engine. "cmon-cmon-cmon-cmon, Fuck!" the engine turned slowly, the car didnt have enough battery power to turn the starter quick enough. anger was filling my body. "lets just run for it!" Gina exclaimed. i knew that if we left the car they would trace it back to my Apartment. "i cant!" i replied to Gina. the heat from my frustration made my body feel like it was bathing in liquid fire. it was similar to the feeling of pain i had after i hit Leo. "Lets go!" i punched my radio out of frustration, but when my fist hit the console, little green sparks came flying out in every direction. almost immediately the car came to life with a familiar and harmonious roar. "okay?" both Gina and i said with confusion in our voices, without a second thought i stuck it into first again and began entering the twisted maze of traincars.


the Trainyard was filled with old and rusted scrap. train cars were littered all over the place in no possible order. a narrow dust trail shown the direction in which Reina and Mike took off, but the Mercedes was nowhere to be seen. the flashing red and blue lights were shrouded by the dust created by my car. the trails twisted and turned off suddenly while rusted out train cars whizzed by close enough to stick my hand out and touch. still following Mikes feint tire tracks i noticed one of the closer train cars had a large silver streak across the lower edge. accompanied by some glass sparkling on the floor nearby. "i hope they got away ok." i said towards Gina. She was still in a state of shock staring at the radio, waiting for something to happen. "you do know the cops are chasing us, right?" i took a glance in my rearview mirror noticing the red and blue glow was far enough away that we might have a chance of escaping.


i waved my hands in front of Gina's eyes to break her concentration. "how are you so calm?" Gina replied i was a bit suprised by her question. "well um, idunno. i just am. dont worry, they wont catch us." just as i finished talking a large cracking sound came from under the hood. "your fucking kidding me right?" Gina screamed nervously. the engine ceased and the lights went out, but we were still drifting forward. we were now going about 60 miles per hour in pitch black with giant rusty metal death traps on either side of us. the cop was starting to catch up. we noticed the red and blue glow was starting to reflect off the nearby scrap. out of the corner of my eye i saw a small space between two carts that was just big enough to turn in to. "hold on." i slammed down on my brakes and spun the wheel to the left. the car almost did a complete 90 degree spin and barely had enough momentum to squeeze itself into the tiny space. thankfully the space was deep enough to fit the entire car. Gina and i both ducked under the window hoping the car was hidden enough so that the police cruiser didnt notice. it seemed like an eternity ducked down but eventually the cruiser passed us by, leaving a dust trail behind him. we both let out a large sigh of relief when the red and blue glow faded away.

Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Advances in Internet

lol its amazing the advances in technology these days. one minute we are using horses to get from A to B, and the next minute we are Buying the land that we rode those horses on while never leaving your trusty computer chair. they even got Virtual A.I. to help you with Questions and the buying process. whats next? we are a bit overdue for some flying cars. lets keep our fingers crossed :)

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Chapter 6 " Its not the same..."

"sorry but i gotta go!" i replied. the Paramedic helped me out of the chair after stitching and bandaging up my wounds. "go where?" gina asked nervously from across the stall. "i need to meet up with Reina and Mike. they have something of mine that i need to pick up." not a complete lie, but enough to lower any suspicion. "please dont do anything too strenuous. the stitches will hold, but too much activity may cause minor tears and cause infection." the male paramedic noted as if he saw through my lie. "ill be fine, dont worry ive survived worse." i replied. "ok but could you give me a ride home Jack? i kinda missed my bus around the time that you knocked out Leo." Gina asked with the most innocent look on her face. "oh shit Leo!" i turned my head to the left and noticed Leo still sprawled out on top of the milk spattered bar with the female nurse keeping a close eye on him. "is he okay?" i asked nervously to the nurse. "he'll be fine, he's just sleeping it off. he should be up in about 10 to 15 minutes or so." the nurse never took her eyes off him as she spoke to me. "he's not fine! hes gonna be paying off that cappuchino machine for the rest of his life!" the boss blurted out from behind the counter staring in disbelief on how David took out his beloved goliath. that machine was the trademark of the bosses business. now that its gone, its going to put a major dent in his profits. "always thinking about money." i muttered to myself. "anyway, Gina if you need a lift ill take you but you gotta show me where you live again. i kinda forgot." i said. Gina let out a sigh of contempt. "your truly amazing sometimes Jack, you know that right?" "sarcasm will get you everywhere in life Gi-gi. except home..." i let out a smirk and headed toward the exit.



on our way out the door, leo started to wake up. you could already hear the boss screaming at him by the time we reached my car. "so which way?" i asked as i opened the driver door and fell into my seat. "just drive and ill tell you when to turn ok?" gina Replied "yes ma'am!" pretending to be a chauffeur. after about a minute of trying to start my car, it finally roared to life. i decided to start heading towards the old train station since thats where i planned to meet up with Reina and Mike. since i remembered Gina's house was in the same general direction, she didnt make a peep. about ten minutes of driving passed in silence, Gina was staring out the passenger window. "im coming with you." she blurted "what? to where?" i replied "you know where, im not stupid. youre going to race mike again! dont you remember what happened last time?" "its not the same!" interrupting her mid-sentence. "this time i know i can win! last time was a fluke. i was in the lead until he tapped my bumper and spun me out. he wont even get a chance to do that this time." i gritted my teeth wishing to myself that what i was saying was true. i took a glance at Gina and noticed she was staring out the window again. i guess i hurt her feelings when i snapped at her. the rest of the ride was silent. knowing that she would refuse to be dropped off at her house, i proceeded to the train station.


Noticing Mike sitting on the hood of his new car with a look of boredom on his face, i could tell i was very late. i pulled up next to his car since it was already parked at the starting line. "you still dont have to do this." Gina muttered. knowing that i would ignore those words. "hey guys! sorry im late. i had to work overtime tonight." i yelled out the open moonroof. "impatient here, wanted to bail out early." Reina replied while aiming her chin at Mike. "but i kept him buisy till you showed up". Mike smirked and glanced at me. "you sure that shithole can keep up with this?" Mike waved his hand across his car like he was on a gameshow. it was a brand new Mercedes CLK convertible. "so daddy bought you a new one huh? how long will this one last, three days, maybe four? i smirked and stepped out of my car to greet Reina. "whats up Rei? was he making out with his car again? i got Gina with me if thats ok." i gave her a hug and pointed toward Gina who was still sitting in the car staring at the Mercedes. "yea its fine, but i suggest she gets out of the car before the race." Reina and Gina used to be best friends in high school, but they both soon went their separate ways like most high school acquaintances do. "Are we gonna do this or are we gonna bitch around like women?" Mike blurted while hopping over his door into his seat. "Hell yeah! lets do this thing!" i jogged towards my car and slid across the hood like i was in an 80's cop film. only to notice i left a giant scratch across my entire hood from my pants. both Mike and Reina noticed the scratch and burst out laughing. "smooth!" both Mike and Reina said at the same time by coincidence. i growled in response and sat in the drivers seat.

Monday, March 22, 2010

2 chapters on their way!

2 more chapters on their way including  "Jack" chapter and a darker "Rinn" chapter. be sure to check in daily since my writers block is fading away :)

Friday, March 19, 2010

PrivateLabel.Offershop.net

lately ive been surfing the web and found this site called http://privatelabel.offershop.net/  i use it for everything. they got links to the most popular Products available. its a simple site too! just click in the category section weather it be Retail, Auto Parts, Cell Phones etc... they got it. its a one stop shop for almost everything you need. http://privatelabel.offershop.net/

More Coming Soon!

i promise ill be putting up more chapters when i get a chance. im still brainstorming and i have yet to come up with a title. rest assured there will be many more chapters coming soon. acutally im 3 chapters ahead of myself in my brain but im yet to write them down on paper. its all a matter of organizing and having the story flow correctly and feel "Organic" yea im weird i know but hey, sometimes its good to be weird. i doubt stephen king is the most "normal" person :) although my stuff is nowhere close to his masterpieces...

Chapter 5 "let it go Jack..."

"hold on hes waking up."..."Sir?"... "are you ok?"... "Sir?" when my eyes opened, all i saw was a blurry woman in a blue and white with a badge on her chest. "whats going on? my head is killing me." i reached my hand up towards the back of my head but i stopped midway after i felt a sharp pain shoot through my right shoulder. "you were just in an accident. as im told, there was a malfunction in one of the coffee makers and it resulted in an explosion." the paramedic responded. "you have a minor cut on your right shoulder blade as well as a wound on the back of your head from a bronze pipe." i saw the blurry blue woman leave my line of sight and a blurry red one take her place. "Jack?" a familiar voice sounded. "Gina? you okay?" i asked "im fine. you blocked everything with your head" she giggled a little "good thing your thick headed, otherwise you would never of survived."



my vision was clear enough now to see a smile of relief on gina's face. "how long was i out?" i asked "about twenty minutes. its about nine o'clock." gina said. "great, im late." i said "late for what?" by now i realized i was laying on the floor and everybody was standing over me. i used my left arm and pushed myself up into a sitting position. "im just late for something ok?" trying to change the subject. "do i need to go to the hospital?" i asked the paramedic to my right, staring in disbelief. "well um, usually massive head trauma victims arent able to sit up that quickly. im guessing it wasnt as bad as we thought." the paramedic took her hand and placed it across my back for support. i reached up to feel the back of my head with my left this time, and felt a golfball sized lump.


"ouch, that must of hurt!" a nasal voice from behind me said. i spun my head around almost in an "Exorcist" fashion. "you! you fucking bastard!" i saw Leo with a bandage wrapped around his right eye and ear. "you piece of shit screw up! you almost killed me!" leo was frozen solid in place. "dude, it was an accident! honest!" leo replied "lo-look!" he pointed at his right eye. "i got hurt too!" his hand was shaking, and he knew i noticed it. "im sorry, honestly!" i didnt hear him say those last words. Anger was filling my body. "too bad the boss didnt fire you for this." i muttered, trying to calm myself down. leo looked down and muttered to himself a bit too loud. "too bad that pipe didnt kill ya." when i heard what he said i jumped up, spun around a placed my right fist directly into his face. leo stumbled backward and landed neatly across one of the booth tables, knocked out cold. "jack!" gina screamed. my head spun around, followed by my body. i noticed that Gina, the Paramedic, my Boss, and another male Paramedic staring straight at me with their jaws dropped. "sorry" i smirked. "unbelieveable" the male paramedic said from behind everyone else. "huh? what i do?" i curiously asked. "you managed to sustain a massive head wound, stand up, spin 180 degrees and proceed to knock out your colleague with your arm that still has a large piece of shrapnel inside it. do you even feel it right now?" the paramedic stood there still with his jaw dropped, staring at my right arm. "i have never seen anything like it. its Inhuman!" that word stung me like ive heard it before. i just cant remember when.


my right arm was covered in my own blood. i must of forced the piece of metal in deeper when i punched leo. all of a sudden a massive pain began to build up in my back and right arm. "ow-oww-owww!" i clutched my right arm with my left. "what is this pain?" a familiar feeling of liquid fire ran through my arm, shoulder and back. "stop it!" i groaned "stop what? whats wrong jack?" gina asked. "my arm. its on fire!" i collapsed to my knees in pain. "let it out Jack, you know how." a familiar voice said behind me. "how?" i groaned "how what? sir whats wrong? answer me!" the paramedic demanded. "let it go Jack." the voice said again. "remember." a wave of pictures went through my head, but none of them made any sense. the pain was getting stronger now. i had no choice. i reached my left hand over my right shoulder and pulled out the knife shaped piece of shrapnel out of me with a blood curdling scream. the pain in my shoulder slowly dissapeared, but my arm was stil on fire. "let it out you fool!" the familiar voice said yet again. finally as if instinct, i grabbed the bronze metal pipe that hit my head and squeezed it as hard as i could. the fire slowly faded away as the subtle smell of burning milk filled my nostrils. i looked down to see that the droplets of milk and water on the pipe that got everywhere, was sizzling and dissapearing in front of my eyes. "what the hell?" i said to myself. "whats going on jack? are you ok?" ginas voice reminded me where i was. "im fine now" i muttered. "the pain just caught up with me thats all." the paramedics both stared at me knowing that was a lie. "do any of you have a band aid?" i smiled as i stuck out my bloody arm towards the paramedics."we can stitch up the wound as well a give you a shot of Roxicodone to dull any excess pain. would you rather that instead of a band aid?" the female paramedic smirked as she held up a needle and thread.